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poetry

March 4, 2008

i write alot of poetry. it is kinda dark so if you dont like it....you can just kiss my ass... i love my poetry and so do alot of other ppl.... oh and btw these are my old poems...

Lonely

I scream I cry I call out your name But you never come I lived I died I bled for you But you didn't care I wanted I needed I desired you arms around me But you pushed me away Nothing I said brought you back to me Nothing I say will bring you back Everything we had is gone Everything is in pieces Disappeared Because of my stupid mistakes

Children

Here they are The children of long ago Dancing, prancing by the river Singing Shouting Although no one can hear Their shriveled, emaciated bodies Barely visible in the glaring winter sun Their clothes ripped to shreds Barely rags hang on their shoulders From years of struggle From times of inpatients Their skin dirty Their eyes blank Their voices silent Their lies put to rest Here they are The children of past years

While I Was There

While I was there Lightly sleeping in my bed I could hear my parents Hear my parents fighting.

While I was there Standing in my room I could here my momma crying Crying herself to sleep.

While I was there Sittig in at her bedside I knew I couldn't hear her breathe

While I was there Crying at her funeral I thought I could hear her voice again And yet it was just my imagination.

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      sam300467
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      cant wait for the FTSK signing at HT!
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      Posted 5 months ago by sam300467

      i right a little poetry myself, check out my blog titled: poetry

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      cant wait for the FTSK signing at HT!
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      Posted 5 months ago by sam300467

      love em!

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      Posted 5 months ago by Willturner

      OMG (not to sound preppy, I'm not) you HAVE to post these in my March loyal challenge, I love them!!!! (the name of the topic it goes in is Febuary winner of the loyal challange)

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      Just thinking of Criss Angel.
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      Posted 5 months ago by Erika101

      I love your poems they like went inside me they made me think... wow!!!

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      when life gives you lemons... u squirt the juice in ur emymies eyes and laugh in the face of their pain
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      Posted 5 months ago by mf_illusionist

      wow ur poems r deep it really means alot 2 u dark poetry is da best type of poetry i feel ur pain man in both poems thr not jus words wit repetition or rhyme they mean alot nd i respect dat

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      mikaela_maria
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      still learning, bear with me here haha.
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      Posted 5 months ago by mikaela_maria

      amazing, i love the children one.

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      Posted 5 months ago by Megan9107

      Those are really really good. They arent dark, they are wonderful. Very good! Continue writing, you're talented...

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      im lucky!!!!!!!!!!!
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      Posted 6 months ago by MAC

      Not much. Hows about yourself?

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      Posted 6 months ago by SleepingLionheart

      I feel what your saying, if that makes sense to you.

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      Posted 6 months ago by Enalein

      wow your poems are very nice and dark! I like your styl to writ! go on :)